martes, 20 de mayo de 2008

Jessica and Adam

Jessica and Adam met five years ago. She was working in london as a secretary in a bank. One day she saw him in a shopping. He was a university student, but was doing a summer job at a kiosk in the shopping. He had come to the place where she was working, the office, and they drank together a coffe.
As Adam was leaving, he left a little message next to Jessica's computer, that said his telephon number. Jessica phoned him when she read the message and they met the same evening. Adam and jessica liked each other a lot. Adam loves that she is very good person and her beautiful eyes, and Jessica likes him because he was a real gentleman. One day a terrible thing happened. Jessica was hit by a car while she was crossing the road. She was badly hurt. Six month later Jessia was OK again. Adam had helped her a lot, because he paid some surgerys very expensives. Also they have married and they have had one son that the called Brian.

1 comentario:

Jimena Cas dijo...

Good work Fabio!
Please, check the meanings of "shopping", some word orders and grammar structures such as "surgerys very expensives", the spelling of "coffe" and "telephon" and the use of narrative tenses (past).
Correct, print and hand in before May 30th.