lunes, 16 de junio de 2008

Will it be possible to live forever?

Some people, like Ray Kurzweil (a book writer), said that in a little more than 50 years, we’ll probably be able to live forever. We’ll download our own consciousness on a computer and we will never die.

This idea might be possible. The Technology grows every year and it’s more and more interesting all the time. There are many new inventions every day, and they are more perfect and fascinating than the older ones.

But, I don’t agree with Ray Kurzweil’s idea. Imagine that we are likely to enter on the Internet and see people’s memories; it won’t be nice for them that we see their secrets and actions! And, if ALL the people that die download their lives into a computer, (and, of course, more people die) these machines will be so overloaded!!

1 comentario:

Jimena Cas dijo...

Good work Melany!
Please, check some grammar mistakes, such as:
technology is growing (no article)
I also feel there is a conclusion missing, perhaps one last idea to round off.
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